Brian Randall wrote:

DB Sommer wrote:

"'Stolen kisses are, a part of a sweet youth that, vanishes

think you'd be better off dropping the commas.

        It's a haiku. Those denote the line breaks. I'll leave 'em in since it's
preferable to breaking the entire thing up just to preserve the format.

The "standard" way of denoting line breaks for poetry quoted in prose
is to use slashes:  

	"'Stolen kisses are/a part of a sweet youth that/vanishes

Or at least, that's the way I learned it.

-- Bob

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