I'm very very very glad to see you're writing again, especially this
story! :)

One comment:  Didn't you use the bit about the types of bathing suits in
an earlier chapter?  I'm *sure* that I've seen it, or something like it
before.

I hope to see more of this (or "Redheads") soon!

-- 
my $n = 2; print +(split //, 'e,4c3H r ktulrnsJ2tPaeh'
."\n1oa! er")[map $n = ($n * 24 + 30) % 31, (42) x 26]

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