I know this is rather late, but my ISP is being a pain. My mail server
doesn't like your email address, though I have yet to figure out why. So
here is my late, and very much outdated little comment.

    I will leave you dangling with this one for a little while, because I
intend to let this story rest a while. In the mean time, I shall return to
work  on _Comes the Cold Dragon_. It's high time that I put that one out

of

my misery.

   That sounds... rather ominous.


   I must say I got a big kick out of the scene with Genma, by far
the most ammusing portion of this chapter. I like everything else as
well, but I was really having fun reading that part. There isn't much
for me to comment on gramatically, or spelling wise, as Michale
got those I would have commented on before I read this. The only
thing that he mentioned that I noted in your reply was the "little sister /
Little Sister" bit. Personally I agree with you that it should NOT be
capitolized, as it was being used as a refrence, not a title for Akane.
Not the best wording, but I never really learned all the proper
gramatical terms. Thanks for a good read!

--
Druid
druid@bigplanet.com




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