Maybe a glossary would be a good idea. ^^;

I, personally, second the suggestion of removing the
Japanese.  As always, it's the author's call, but I
feel that stories written for an English-speaking
audience just don't need sprinklings of random
Japanese words, with the possible exception of things
that don't translate very well, like the name suffixes
("chan" and so forth).

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http://voidstar.pitas.com/
November's Stand of the Month is Anassi's "Diver Down"

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