You wrote:

Hi!
*sigh* Yet another ranma fic...

As long as its good.

 "Wish Bringer... Bring the Pigtailed Girl bigger br...

Heh

 "Kuno, darling!" she said quickly, before the strange couple could
move on. "I need you to use the Wish Bringer to free me from Ranma's
control!"

I think Ranma just outsmarted himself.

 "Wish Bringer! Here is my final wish: Free the Pigtailed Girl from
the control of the Vile Sorcerer, Ranma Saotome!"

 "Your Wish Is My Command," the sword responded in it's

its

 "Whadda hell was all that about?! I'm still a girl!"

 To which the Wish Bringer responded: "TILT!" and promptly exploded.

Heh.

"Ranma! Ranma, are you all right?" she asked, almost wailing.

Ranma groaned as she came round, propping herself up onto her hands
and knees and clutching her head.

"Uhh... what happened?" she asked, more to herself than anyone else.
She kept her eyes clamped shut as she tried to shake the ringing of
concussion

drop 'of concussion'. It works better without it.

"Uh... do I know you?"

Argh! Not amnesia. :)

"I don't know who you are, or how you know me, but I don't appreciate
being attacked for no reason!" she growled at Akane, a hint of fear
showing in her angry, distrustful eyes. The visage was enhanced by a
crack of thunder from the darkening weather.

"Ranma..." Akane's demeanour reverted to it's

its

 >

"What the hell are you talking about?" Ranma yelled back, her gaze
switching from the kneeling girl to the overweight man. "How the heck
can she be my fianc,e? Are you blind? We're both girls!"

Oops. It's worse than that.

"... If you are truly not suffering from amnesia, then you could tell
me where you've been living for the past year."

"Heh, of course I can! I've... I've, uh... damn." Ranma cursed,
glaring at the ground, having realised that she _couldn't_ actually
remember anything specific about her past, recent or distant. There
was one thing she was certain of though, "I can still remember who I
am, though! And I'm telling you, I'm _not_ a boy cursed to turn into
a girl! I don't even want to be a boy - they're all perverts!"

"Got that right," Akane muttered under her breath.

Heh.

Finally, with one more peal of thunder, the ever nearing storm
arrived and disgorged it's

its

 watery precipitate onto the group. Before

Genma could say anything else, he was transformed into a panda,
removing his capacity for speech. Before Akane could say anything
else, Ranma transformed...

Oh?

"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" It would have been a perfectly girly,
shrilly scream, if not for the perfectly masculine, alto voice
producing it.

I see. it's actually the result of the wish. Not true amnesia because of the
explosion. Cute.

"Ranma, my boy! You're cured!" Soun exclaimed as he jumped up. "Now
the schools can be joined! We need to organise

organize

Right on cue, the eldest of the three Tendo daughters came into the
room from the kitchen, kettle in hand. She almost dropped it when she
saw that Ranma was still male, despite being wet.

Why? For all she knows someone hit him with hot water before he came in.

The angry man's demon head withered away, being replaced by a cascade
of tears as he bawled his eyes out. "Bwaaa!! My son in law

son-in-law

"Why, you've been living here since last autumn, Ranma-chan," Kasumi
told the girl. Being much more intelligent than accredited, she had
deliberately used the -chan honorific to test Ranma's response - in
the past he had always twitched or winced at the effeminate suffix...
but not this time. Unless he was using the soul of ice technique
learnt from Cologne, Kasumi was sure that Ranma definitely though

thought

Soun and Genma watched the boy-turned-girl-turned-girl-turned-boy
leave the room. As she left, Soun lit up a cigarette and turned to
Genma. With a puff of smoke, the demon head returned in all it's

its

Nabiki 'tsk'ed and muttered something about pathetic fathers before
rising to her feet and following, recorder in hand, hoping to catch
the story (however distorted it may be, coming from Genma's mouth) on
tape.

Well, don't know where you're going with this one yet. Could be potentially
intersting. We'll have to see.

D.B. Sommer

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