Subject: [FFML] [C&C][fic][R.5/SM/whatever][citrusy]Married, With Scouts Ch1
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 10/28/2002, 4:43 PM
To: ffml@anifics.com, "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Fri, 25 Oct 2002 15:24:21 -0400 "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>
wrote:

"Um," Ranma answered.  "Well, I was kinda forced into them.  Akane and I 
were promised since {I :} we were born.  Then {dad : Dad} took me on a training trip to 
China, and I kinda ran afoul of this Amazon whose laws say she has to marry 
me since I beat her, then there's my friend Ukyo, who says my dad betrothed 
her to me when I was six."  He took another sip of the coffee.  "I guess I 
loved Akane, in some ways, but I just don't know what to do."

Ranma, ever the man who couldn't stand to see a woman cry reached out a hand 
to Shampoo's shoulder.  "Maybe Setsuna's right.  Maybe there's a loophole in 
the laws.  Maybe Cologne knows something.  Look, I'll go with you to the old 
{ghouls : ghoul}."

Ranma shrugged.  "I got you to thank for my wives.  Whatever the reason, I 
still love them.  I owe you is all.  Let's go see what the {Ghoul : ghoul} has to 
say."

"Ranma Saotome!  You two timing jerk!  Die!" The mallet was raised to attack 
position

Shouldn't that be four, make that five, timing? :}b

"Yes, {love : Love}.  Look.  Amazons are a matriarchal society, so a woman is a 
member of the ruling and warrior castes.  She's the Champion, which 
effectively make her a princess.  You are her legal husband, and you are 
refusing to acknowledge this.  She's here in Japan because she can't go home 
as a disgraced woman, and she can't marry anyone else.  For an analogy, it's 
like you got her pregnant.  All Cologne and Shampoo have been trying to do 
is get you to live up to your responsibility."

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