[FFML] Re: [fanfic][ranma]Lure the Tiger from the Mountains.14-16/30

Just a few quick remarks. (I'm frantically trying to rewrite unposted
chapters based on C&C I've already received. Perhaps I should
mention that the next post of "Lure the Tiger" will be just a tiny
bit delayed?)

1)Yes, Genma is a Bad Guy. ^_* he is a stench in the nostrils of
all decent men, a scourge upon humanity, the end product of a hearty
lunch of road-kill and X-Lax. I feel it's only right to remind readers
of this now and again.

2) "Teaching a pig to sing" . . . Genma/Ranma are the pigs in this \
analogy, though I see what you mean.

3) There was an interesting article in the Wossamotta University
Journal of Abbynormal Psychology concerning the relationship
between the ability to quote Monty Python episodes and brain-cells
turning into oatmeal.

4) Ice Cream joke: This had to do with Females and chocolate, NOT
with Ranma/Ranko and ice-cream. ^_*

5)fast and flexible: again, I'm commenting on female vs. male
in general, not Ranma/Ranko. Generally speaking women have
better reaction time, higher tolerance to G-force, larger range
of vision/hearing, etc, etc.

6)pachinko: well, this is a fairly important plot point. Plus, I've been
getting complaints that I'm TOO sparse in my narrative. I probably
could have cut this and the bit with Ranko/Akane in the doujou
quite a bit. It's the sort of thing that depends a lot on the audience
editor. Some people like it, other don't.

7)Stooge-fu: That's an actual self-defense method developed for
women. You run one hand up along the chest, so the Bad Guy doesn't
see it coming. The other hand behind the head to keep him from
jerking away.

The next release is going to take at least another few days. I've got
rough idea of how I want to revise it, but it's taking longer than usual.
(I'm on Rev. 15 right now, not counting minor changes that don't
get numbered)

Next out will probably be the last chapter of Tyger, Tyger. Once
that's done I'll post it to FFML. (It could be the last chapter of
Bedlam Fire if I can ever figure out the segue) I have also been asked
(goodness knows why) to write a couple of more 'mature' stories.
So I've roughed out a couple of ideas.
1] Ranma :Genma deliberately pushes Ranma into the cursed
springs, then goes to the Amazon village so he can grab another
girl. (Because he has a client who will pay more for a matched pair)
He then sells Ranko & Shan Pu for enough to retire on.
(intending of course to retrieve both of them) but
the buyers are actually from a parallel earth populated only by
women and Genma can't cross the barrier. So he runs to the
Tendou's for a little help.

2]Sailor Moon: The White Moon royal family are not entirely
human (which is why they're the royal family) Usagi, through an
unfortunate accident, reaches sexual maturity a thousand years
too early . . . and begins seducing and impregnating her harem.
(Did I mention she was not entirely human?)

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