| Subject: [FFML] Re: (fanfiction)(Ranma 1/2)(Please critique!) |
| From: Timothy Groves |
| Date: 10/22/2002, 8:50 AM |
| To: James Powell <jpowell@iefx.com>, Fanfic Mailing List <ffml@anifics.com> |
James Powell wrote:
That being said, with all the other C&C on this work, I can only point out that in the section just after Nabiki talking with Cologne, Andrea broke her own rule. After being asked by Ranma-kun if she would make Ranma-chan commit seppuku, Nodoka refers to her as "Ranko". This is the only time she calls her "Ranko". Just a little later on, Nodoka refers to her as simply "Ranma."
Yes, but given the fact that Nodoka knew Ranma as Ranko for quite some time...isn't it possible that it was Nodoka who screwed up, not Andrea? (Or at least Andrea could lie, and say that's what she meant... :)-- ICQ#66022322 "It's a terrifying thing, isn't it? To live in fear. That's what it's like to be a slave." --Rutger Hauer, Bladerunner ______________________________________________________________________ Post your free ad now! http://personals.yahoo.ca .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List----. | Administrators - ffml-admins@anifics.com | | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@anifics.com | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `---- http://ffml.anifics.com/faq.txt -----'