Subject: [FFML] Re: [fic][Original][R.5/SM/AMG]TOD: B1C10:Ceremonies
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 10/17/2002, 11:01 PM
To: "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>, ffml@anifics.com


On Fri, 11 Oct 2002 15:42:45 -0400 "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:

Shan Pu looked after her, wondering what she'd done wrong when Ke Lun spoke. 
"Ah, {great-granddaughter : Great-granddaughter}. I know you meant well, but can you not tell her 
heart is lost to the girl as well?"

Even more so perhaps.

"You no talk to groom like that!" Shan Pu jumped into Akane's way and went 
to shake her finger in Akane's face. Akane registered only that a strange 
girl was moving to an attack position and reacted before recognition {sat : sank} in.

Zhu Shu looked upon the failure of all she cared about. {No-one : No one} could look at 
her and not know her life would end along with that of one of her friends. . 

The Loremaster turned and faced Shan Pu. "The law is clear, Daughter of Par 
Fume. Death or marriage. Honor is met either way. You have been defeated by 
Ranma Saotome. By law shall he {become : becomes : shall become} your husband. You have been defeated 
by Akane Tendo. By law shall she {become : becomes : shale become} your wife. May love last as long as 
life. The elders have spoken."

Up in her tree, Urd still sat in shock. The ultimate force had guided Shan 
Pu to a resolution Urd had not expected, but it looked like it would be a 
better way of making Shan Pu happy than any of her love potions . . . She 
was relieved, but the Loremasters tale had stunned her . . . A goddess with 
white hair and golden skin?

The ultimate force probably had even more to do with Akane's defense.

In a fortress in China, The masked man smiled at the news then tucked the 
mirror in his sleeve.  A week from now in China. He would have to move 
{quicker : quickly}, but they couldn't have played into his hands better.  The demon had 
indeed been useful.  Now to arrange his end of their bargain.

Soun Tendo wasn't sure he understood everything exactly, but it seemed to 
him that incredible fortune had smiled on him. He beamed down at the empty 
cup of {Sake : sake}, and Tao-Ching refilled it.

"I hate formal garb." A once more male Ranma said. "And I hate formal 
ceremonies." He frowned at his {Samurai : : samurai} topknot and sighed. He pulled it 
straight again before tightening the ties.

"You look very nice in it, dear." his mother commented. "Very {Samurai : samurai}. Now 
fix your swords, {dear : Dear}." She went back to hemming the ankles of his outfit.

Ranma glared at his {sword : swords}. The katana and wakazashi were crooked. He sighed 
again and straightened them {too :}. "I still don't get this. I thought she 
wanted to kill me, and you say she's been hunting me down just to marry me, 
so now Granddad's made a deal with the Amazons to marry me off to her."

"There's more to it than just that, dear. Your Father and Mr. Tendo did 
something that the Amazons considered enough of a service to them that they 
were willing to make a formal alliance with the Saotomes and the Tendos.  
The elders came to Tao-Ching Hibiki to discuss how to approach the Saotomes 
and the Tendos to arrange the alliance and he took them to your grandfather. 
{  :}Your grandfather saw an advantage to accepting the alliance.  Your 
betrothal and marriage is a separate affair.  You defeated Shampoo in 
combat.  Under Amazon law, that makes you her husband.  Father is following 
Amazon law as a token of good faith.  He thinks your having two wives is a 
sign of virility and he also believes that you must fulfill your duty to the 
Saotome clan.  The arrangement with the Tendos was made before your 
grandfather decided that Genma was a grave mistake on my part, and whether 
he regretted allowing the agreement to be made, your grandfather never goes 
back on his word.  This marriage to Shan Pu is also something he sees as 
being honor bound to do because of the alliance."

"You are young yet, Ranma.  There is still much time left for you to learn 
the politics your elders play.  Your grandfather sees an advantage; that is 
all you must know for now.  And you really should call Father 'Grandfather.' 
{  :}He hates rudeness, son."

"That you will have to take up with your father, {son : Son}.  I have every letter 
he has sent me in the last ten years, and I have written him whenever I knew 
where he was."

"So {pop : Pop} knew you were alive?  I'm going to kill that panda!"

"You shall do no such thing, Ranma.  Whatever you may do while sparring is 
one {thing son : thing, Son}, but deleberately hunting down your father with murder on your 
mind is my job."

"Aw, {mom : Mom}."{:
}
Nodoka sat back to continue working on the hem.  "A man shouldn't be 
embarrased when his mother displays affection."

"I'm just not used to it, {mom : Mom}.  I mean, I just found out you even still 
existed a little while ago, and it was in a rather embarrassing manner."

Nodoka gave him a raised eyebrow.  "I would be, had you been male.  While I 
wish grandchildren, {son : Son}, you must be properly married to ensure they are 
legitimate.  I will not have you destroying our family name, {son : Son}.  No matter 
how manly it is too sow your wild oats, one should not do so with the 
intended bride.  No.  Until the day you are married, you should not take 
that risk."

"If they do, I have a formal {Kimono : kimono} for you." Nodoka smiled.

"He did.  And I fully intended on making you carry it out too.  One Genma in 
the Saotome line is bad enough.  Had he made you a carbon copy of him, it 
would have broken my heart, but I would have had to redeem my family's 
honor, {son : Son}.  I heard you in the garden before Shan Pu and Ke Lun joined me.  
Your words made me proud of you.  You acted nobly in asking Zhu Shu to marry 
you in an attempt to make both her and Akane happy.  You accepted her 
refusal with dignity.  In all ways, you were a gentleman.  Beyond that, you 
have faced your curse and made a decision to make the best of it.  A strong 
man accepts what he cannot {change son : change, Son}.  A lesser man rails against it.  Your 
curse would break many men, yet you learned to accept it, and that makes me 
proud.  It is no shame for you to be female at times, Ranma.  Like a {Kabuki : kabuki}
player, it is a mask.  Underneath, it has not made you less of a man, 
indeed, your choice to learn more about being a woman shows you have enough 
confidence in your masculinity to explore your femininity.  All people 
posses both yin and yang, my son, you simply posses the ability display both 
equally.  If you can learn to balance your male and female sides, you will 
become a better man for it.  In all ways, this shows that you will be a man 
like no other. . .  And to me, that shows that you will be far more than I 
ever expected when your father took you off on his training trip."

Ranma gulped.  "Um-gee  . . .  [Thanks mom : Thanks, Mom]."

The limousine pulled up to the Tendo Dojo in silence.  The chauffeur got out 
and opened the rear door for an elderly gentleman in formal garb as a 
{Daimyo : daimyo}.  "We have arrived at the address you gave me, Master Saotome." the 
man said as he bowed.

The elder Saotome nodded.  "Yes, my {grandson�s : grandson's} betrothal is to be here, as 
the formal conclusion to the alliance.  Thank you, Hiromi.  I will call for 
you when the ceremony is over.�  He straightened his swords as the chauffeur 
bowed and moved to stand at attention by the car door, then stepped forward 
to meet Tao-Ching at the entrance to the {Dojo : home : dojo}.

Everyone ransacked the house, but no trace of her could be found until 
Kasumi called from the family's {Shrine : shrine}. They piled into the small room to 
find Kasumi sitting before a sword stand {sat : set} before the alter. On the stand 
sat both of Zhu Shu's swords, minus ribbons. They faced in opposite 
directions and from them hung the fine silver chain that held the Dragon 
signet ring Kasumi was staring at tearfully. "She left the most important 
things she owned. . . ." Her voice choked off.

"Calm your fears, {child : Child}." Ke Lun said from the doorway. "She would not have 
left her weapons here if she had gone to die. Can you not see? She could 
have made no more sincere a promise that she will return." She looked around 
the faces depending on her for hope. "Her heart needs time to sort itself 
out. Give her that time." She hopped forward to lay a hand reverently on the 
blades. "When it is time, she will return." She traced along the delicate 
carving of the dragon along the blade, so faint as to be just visible. "Do 
not fear for the Dragon, my child . . . She will be back. . . ."

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