Subject: [FFML] [C&C][fic][Original][R.5/SM/AMG]TOD:The Dragon's Child:Prologue:The Dance of Shadows
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 10/17/2002, 11:16 PM
To: ffml@anifics.com, "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Tue, 15 Oct 2002 13:17:33 -0400 "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>
wrote:

She turned and looked at the formal Mandarin gown laid out on her bed. She 
really should put it on and go down to join the ceremony, but she just 
couldn't summon the will to.  Her mind whirled with too many conflicting 
emotions: happiness, jealousy, relief, despair. . . ever since she had 
merged chi with Akane, she had felt like she was dancing along a razorblade. 
{  :}The chaotic whirlwind of Akane's passions had nearly shattered the iron 
control she had been forced to build following Ying Ying's death, the sole 
defense she had against the overwhelming grief. . . .

She passed Ryouga, determinedly heading for the {Dojo : dojo}. She figured he might 
find it next week, as he was heading in exactly the wrong direction. She 
smiled. She could sympathize with the lost boy . . . she had felt like she 
was lost all the time recently too, wandering aimlessly through a blizzard 
in the dark. . . .

"As I said . . . I am {being :} a messenger."

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