Zorknot42@aol.com wrote:

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All right. I'm going to do this in an MST format. My comments will be
preceded by a ">>>>>"

Here goes...

Sorry to cut all of it out, but it would get too long otherwise. A few
comments:

1. Japanese don't pluralize. One Saotome, several Saotome. Like sheep...
(That many fanfiction authors disregard this is a pet peeve of mine)
2. Were extant = existed. More or less.
3. Some agreement on the lack of description, especially of new
characters and objects. Not that _I_ know how to work that stuff in
seamlessly, but...
4. There is no four.

Umm.. I think that's all for now.

SP



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