Donald Lee Granberry <noharness@mac.com> wrote:
"Class sizes go way up whenever a popular martial arts movie hits the
streets, then attendance just sort of dries up over the next year. Dad
always manages to hang onto a few long-term students, but never many."
Akane paused to giggle. "Nabiki says that if she ever meets Bruce Lee, she's
going to throw him on the ground and rape him out of gratitude."
...erm...I thought it was s'posed to be funny...I got the context...I
laughed...isn't that what it was s'posed to do?
Gie...just a common reader...
Yes, it was intended as humor. No, it did not work as such, at least not for
a great many people reading the story so it has already been changed. It
seems that the majority hung up on the fact that Bruce Lee is deceased and
had died well before the setting of this story. The remainder did not like
the idea of "rape", although one wonders...never mind! It simply didn't work
so I have taken a different tack.
I do, however, appreciate your kind words and I want to thank you for
speaking up.
Regards,
Don Granberry.
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