Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Thu, 10 Oct 2002 17:04:22 -0400 "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:
Evening found Zhu Shu setting in the garden by the {Koi : koi} pond meditating.
She had begged off teaching the {Senshi : senshi} today, allowing Akane to run the
girls through basic exercises and having Ranma spar with Makoto. With Zhu
Shu watching, he hadn't showed off too much, and he'd actually proven to be
adept at teaching. The girls had been upset that Zhu Shu was too drained to
teach, and had been all for going and teaching Ai and crew a lesson, but had
desisted when Zhu Shu had assured them she could handle Ai. Still, it had
given her a chance to watch everyone more closely than she could when
teaching. After the session, she assigned a series of stretching execises
for the senshi to do every morning, before going to help Kasumi make dinner.
You capitalized Senshi at the start and didn't at the end. Which do you
prefer?
The rest of the day had proven uneventful, an unusual situation around the
Tendo house since the {Saotome's : Saotomes'} arrival, but everyone had enjoyed the peace.
{ :}Nabiki was even in a very good mood for some reason. Zhu Shu had started
to help with the dishes, only to have Kasumi shoo her out to the garden to
rest.
Hopefully, if she worked on her exercises while in this form, it would
become easier to control. It hadn't been a difficult fight to {reign : rein} herself
in, but she would feel better when she'd learned how to compensate for this
form's stronger impulses.
"When thirteen, Zhu Shu realize not want live life without Ying Ying.
Realize love. Tell Ying Ying, and find Ying Ying feel same, {to : too} scared to
say to Zhu Shu."
"I _was_ trying. I was trying really hard that first day. She was so nice
to me, and we sparred and it was fun. I was really enjoying being with her.
{ :}Then I found out she hates boys, and when she walked in on me in the bath,
well, it just seemed to ruin everything. Then our idiot dads forced this
engagement on us, and Kasumi and Nabiki shoved Akane forward, and well, it
was like I was some undesirable piece of trash and nobody wanted me, so I
was being dropped on her because she was the youngest. I could tell I
wasn't wanted. I was going to go back to China to find you and get this
curse removed."
"Ranma, woman's looks very important to women. You male, you no understand.
{ :}What you do almost worst insult can give. Like someone say Ranma poor
martial artist. Remember cheerleader? Zhu Shu say not pretty, she go
beserk. Only way Zhu Shu make madder, if had commented that Zhu Shu have
bigger breast."
Akane stared off at where Ranma had vanished into the house for a long
moment before {nodding no : shaking her head}. "I think I want to think about it first."
Zhu Shu {shook : nodded} her head in agreement, not pushing.
"Good night, {dear : Dear}. I filled the tub for you a few minutes ago, and left you
a tea set. Try not to fall asleep in the tub and drown."
"Do you believe {it's : its} author is who she says she is? Would a goddess send a
message so mundanely?"
Haven't they delt with Urd before, in her future? If so, I'd expect them
to remember her.
"I would say that answers your question, Warleader. My advice would be to
{get : hie} thee hence to Tokyo."
Since this appears deliberately archiac and hie means to go quickly or
hasten.
"Zhu-sensei is simply making us do basic exercises, Usagi." Makoto replied,
looking out the window of the bus that was taking them back to Juuban after
their Thursday afternoon class at the Tendo dojo. "You'd get better at them
if you'd do them more often. {Their : They're} not that different than the ones I
usually do before my workouts, just geared more for flexibility."
"I asked you if you wanted to come with us to that new okonomiyaki
restaurant? The chef is supposed to be like drop dead gorgeous!"
So Ukyou ended up in Juuban instead of Nerima. I wonder what will happen if
someone mentions one of the Saotomes at the restaurant.
"Excuse me. Did you say Ranma?"
That was mean.
"Yeah, he used to steal okonomiyaki from my dad's yata. We used to spar,
and hang out together. You say he's got a {Fianc�e : fianc�e}?"
As the {Senshi : senshi} departed the restaurant a half hour later, Ukyou looked up
from her grill to watch them go.
"So Ran-chan has a fianc�e and a girlfriend, eh. Well guess what, Ran-chan,
you two-timing womanizer. Your days as a {ladies : ladies'} man are almost over. My
revenge will finally be had!"
"So why Nabiki sell {Hentai : hentai : Hentai Squad} guns in first place?"
"If- if I loved him. I've been thinking about it. I really don't know the
answer." She sat up on the bed and leaned against the wall. "I mean, in
stories, it's always this huge overwhelming feeling that just hits and
'wham' you're in love. I just don't know if that's what I feel."
It's gas.