Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][ranma]Divided I Stand: Chapter 6 Rev 1
From: "Lan Kai-tze" <kaitelan@ix.netcom.com>
Date: 10/11/2002, 2:27 PM
To: "ffml@anifics.com" <ffml@anifics.com>


On Thu, 10 Oct 2002 20:36:49 -0500, Donald Lee Granberry wrote:

before...before Ranma and Genma had shown up. Why had their arrival loosed
the greedy Ice Queen?

loosed? why not 'loosened' or maybe 'released'?

Or even 'let loose', though that's rather Shakespeareish (as in
"Cry havok! And let loose the dogs of war!").


paused to giggle. "Nabiki says that if she ever meets Bruce Lee, she's going
to throw him on the ground and rape him out of gratitude."

Oooo! Necrophilia.  Maybe they could call Alice Cooper do a
double date with Cold Ethel.  And boy, does that date me. 
Seriously, what year is this supposed to be taking place in and
was Bruce Lee still alive at that time?




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