Since I got so much good C&C for this re-launch, I figured I'd save time and reply to it all publicly. Hope no one minds. If you do, then judicious use of the delete key is in order. ^_^
The main aim of this fic, which probably wasn't made clear in the teaser, was to portray three things. First: to explore Ranma's character with the chains on his anger suddenly removed and second to explore Hikaru's character when faced with the fact that he's created the most dangerous and most volatile hate machine on the planet, and third to portray how the other Ranma crew would react to this totally unrestrained Ranma.
I admit, I like Gosunkugi. Just read my Spider-Gos fic to see that. ^_^
Now that the shameless plug is over, on to the reply.
I chose Gosunkugi partly because of his obsession with mystic arts and partly because of his character. I think he would use such methods, and also that he would be most susceptible to them. Blame Mark Twain for that one.
"There are two great tragedies in life. The first is not getting what you want. The second is getting it."
HIkaru Gosunkugi wants Akane for his own, and wants Ranma out of the way. His botched wish is the way. I agree that it needs to be redone, though. I want to thank Allyn Yonge and the others who said so.
Yes, maybe it should be more gradual. I will work on that.
In short, I want to thank everyone who sent in C&C on this work. I will definitely go with this one, now. I just ask that you all hang on for the ride. It's gonna get rough, wherever it goes. ^_^
Thanks sincerely,
Knight Writer
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