Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fic][XOver][Ranma/Inuyasha/Noir/Tenshi ni Narumon] War Games, Chapter 1
From: David Johnston
Date: 10/3/2002, 5:28 PM
To: tprara@catwho.net
CC: ffml@anifics.com


I think this chapter would work better if you opened with a brief 
conspiracy conversation about Ranma, just to set what looks like the
tone of the story, which doesn't really appear to be about the
day to day problems of the Saotome Dojo.



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