Combining both letters, allyn:

well, I read it all the way through. I don't do that very often.

You stop halfway through the fic when you do C+C? Shame on you. :)

 A nice read.
A little dialogue heavy in spots.

Well, that is one of the problems with having a large cast and trying to
give everyone some airtime. Some chapters will focus on a handful of
characters rather than all of them, like the earlier chapters. So that
should help.

 And occasionally I thought you tried

to hard to stay close to the 'original' AVENGERS storyline.

Eh? I think I deviated from that quite some time ago. Loki tried to get the
Hulk and Thor to fight one another was how they formed. Avengers Annual one
had something similar I suppose with Mandy hiring the first unofficial
Lethal Legion to help him spread his hate ray across the planet from a
sattelite. I suppose there are similarities in that.

 Frankly

I liked your story-telling better than Marvel. ^_*

A pity Marvel doesn't feel that way, or I could get paid for my writing. :)

But, all in all, a good story, a nice read.

Thanks.

I meant to put this in my first post.

Thanks to cut and paste, we can now pretend it was here the entire time. :)
I've done the same thing myself right after I hit the send button from time
to time.

Unfortunately I've caught a cold on top
of my allergies and coupled with medication
for both . . .my brain is just a bit fuzzy.

No prob.

1)The Incredible Bwee is the funniest thing
I think I've ever read. ROTFLOL
Actually your Hulk is much better than Marvel's.

Nah. Hulk, especially in Peter David's hands, was a great character. When
Byrne took over, yeah, maybe you could make an argument there comparing
Ryouga Hulk to that version. ^_^

2)Hawkeye is probably your best female characterization
Followed by Electra, then Iron Rose.

Thanks.

3)Best male characterization: Daredevil

Mousse: Yes! Someone likes me better than Ranma!

4)Your Daredevil/Electra interaction is great.

DD: (whimpers) My sore balls say otherwise.

^_^

5)I think I like your "Captain Japan" and "Thor"
characterizations least, because they are so
close to the originals.

Eh? Ranma sure isn't Cap in other than the most basic attitude. Akane I
suppose can be considered a bit like original Thor with the doctor nurse
reversal from the original Blake Foster relationship thing, but here I think
I added a lot to Thor/Akane that wasn't in the original. The memory
contradictions are especially fun to play with.

I'm much more fond

of the story when it's more yours and less
Marvel's.

I have to try and keep a middle ground. Anime characters with super hero
flavor. It's a balancing act, to be sure. Sometimes it works, sometimes it
doesn't. But I do try to keep it.

Thanks for the comments. They are really appreciated in telling me what's
working and what's not.

D.B. Sommer

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