"L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:

As he leered, a young girl wearing a tiger
stripped bikini flew out of the gate.

I think you meant "striped", here. ^_^;

***Grr.  Damn spell check won't point out correctly spelled words!!!!***

    You've been sleeping since then.  The Sysop said
you'd blown most of your energy on the transmittal, since it was an
unscheduled wish.

You might want to say "acting sysop" or "Peorth" (since Peorth seems
to run the show in Urd and Skuld's absence in both the manga and
movie). Urd is Yggdrasil's sysop, and Skuld is debugger.

***Oh... do tell.  never had that mentioned in the books I have, or any of
the data I've downloaded... then again, I've only been begging for good AMG
data for two years now... (sigh.  The demon's in the details, ne?)***

Father was a trifle upset at that, but he said he's

I'm only going to mention that even though he may be their father and
even though both Animeigo and now Dark Horse have translated
"Kami-sama" as "Father", the goddess sisters never call him that.

***Humm... I could defend myself that all I have are the Animeigo and
Darkhorse stuff... but what's the point?  SO long as it is established that
Urd is Hela/Hilds daughter (which honestly, I much prefer Mara to Mahler and
Hela to Hild, but then none of the DH stuff I have even mentions Hild.) and
that Kami-sama is her father, the rest of the storyline works.  What
Bell-chan and sisters call Kami-Sama really isn't relevant.  I'll fix it for
the final. ***

LSM

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