Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fusion][R1/2/Avengers] Avenging Chapter 11 Part A+B
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 9/30/2002, 1:11 PM
To: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


Combining the two:



Just as he had finished picking out a mask, the police arrived. Tatewaki
tried to explain how he was doing the owner a favor by wearing the
outfit,
but the police had the audacity to accuse him of stealing! Unable to
bear
the insult, Tatewaki easily knocked both of them out. Regrettably, they
had
the foresight to call for backup, and he was forced to render a half
dozen
officers {insatiate : senseless : insensate}.

He probably did leave them unsatisfied though.

Heh. Come to think of it, a prereader made me correct it. Looks like i was
right the first time


"You'd better not have. That one is going to be the mother of my
children.
If anything was to happen to her, you would be made very sorry. However,
as
long as she's secure, you have nothing to fear."

"She's... ah, secured."

I guess they're not all that dumb.  They recognize the right answer when
told.

Yep. They know enough to avoid Herb's wrath most of the time. He actually
likes them, for all the headaches they cause. He doesn't need to be paranoid
about them betraying him. Maybe paranoid about them screwing up, but they
don't always screw up.

and the next letter


"So you have extra padding in your chest. A wise precaution," Elektra
remarked.

"Oh, shut up!" Hawkeye swore, barely rolling out of the way of a kick
aimed
at her skull.

100% natural.  Hasn't anyone figured out her secret yet?

The first one to try and grope her will. :)


"Fuchsia. Because it's really dark red, but people try to confuse Hulk
and
call red fuchsia. Hulk hates {Fuchsia : fuchsia}!"

did that a couple time. Was just 'copy/pasting' the word since I was afraid
I'd misspell it. regretably, it was capitalized when I first copied it.


"How can things possibly get worse?" the Mandarin wailed.

Mjolnir cut through the air like a missile, striking the A-bra-mination
cleanly in the face and off his feet.

Why do they always say that?

Because they want to be the one that bucks the odds and doesn't get screwed
by fate for saying it. :)


Elektra walked painfully over to where the floor had caved in, being
extra
careful around the edge, lest she share the Mandarin's fate. The hole
went
deep. Obviously the disintegrator had sheared through multiple floors,
weakening them enough that the mass from those above each one was
sufficient
to drag the Mandarin and the tons of rubble down into the abyss with
him.
"He is disposed of," she informed Bucky.

Why don't they ever make sure they find the body?

Heh. In this case it's only practical since the roof is collapsing. I could
do an omake where they look for the body, find it, and then they themselves
are crushed by debris, I suppose. :)

Thanks for the comments. Used the corrections, as always.

D.B. Sommer



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