On Mon, 30 Sep 2002 13:48:47 -0400 "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:
- And that, she had to admit, was probably why Kami-Sama had given it
-to her as a test.
+ And that, she had to admit, was probably why Kami-Sama had made it
+{a : her} test.
I prefer the previous wording.
***Okay. ANy reasons why?
It shows that Kami-sama meant it for _her_ (hence my {} change as an
alternative), not just as a test in general. I guess I should have said so
in my first message.
Usagi shrugged and pulled out her locket. A few moments later, Zhu
Shu sniffed and rubbed her nose as Sailor Moon did a Ta Da in front of
her, then nodded.
"Zhu Shu see how that could distract until transformation done, but
it take too long."
I don't think that really helps. Most of the youma weren't lesbians.
****Hummm. do you think I was subtle enough about the nosebleed?***
Subtle, what's this thing subtle? It's a useful cliche and I enjoyed
seeing it applied to a female for a change.
Posting this to FFML only, since the last couple I replied to you
directly bounced.
When? The server I POP from shouldn't be rejecting anything, but it was
down for maintenance a week or so ago which might have caused Earthlink's
forwards to it to bounce. If you can send me one or more of the bounce
messages as enclosures, maybe I can figure out what happened.