> Zhu Shu took a deep breath as she straightened. "I have heard
> {mother : my aunt} talking to the revered magistrate."
***Oops. See what happens when you cut and paste. I missed that on my
re-read before posting***
- And that, she had to admit, was probably why Kami-Sama had given it
-to her as a test.
+ And that, she had to admit, was probably why Kami-Sama had made it
+{a : her} test.
I prefer the previous wording.
***Okay. ANy reasons why?
> Usagi shrugged and pulled out her locket. A few moments later, Zhu
> Shu sniffed and rubbed her nose as Sailor Moon did a Ta Da in front of
> her, then nodded.
>
> "Zhu Shu see how that could distract until transformation done, but
> it take too long."
I don't think that really helps. Most of the youma weren't lesbians.
****Hummm. do you think I was subtle enough about the nosebleed?***
Posting this to FFML only, since the last couple I replied to you directly
bounced.
LSMcGill
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