Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fic][Original][r.5/SM/AMG]Tears of a Dragon: B1C2b: Unexpected Meetings
From: "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>
Date: 9/30/2002, 1:48 PM
To: ffml@anifics.com


 >     Zhu Shu took a deep breath as she straightened.  "I have heard
 > {mother : my aunt} talking to the revered magistrate."

***Oops.  See what happens when you cut and paste.  I missed that on my 
re-read before posting***


-    And that, she had to admit, was probably why Kami-Sama had given it
-to her as a test.
+    And that, she had to admit, was probably why Kami-Sama had made it
+{a : her} test.

I prefer the previous wording.

***Okay.  ANy reasons why?



 >     Usagi shrugged and pulled out her locket.  A few moments later, Zhu
 > Shu sniffed and rubbed her nose as Sailor Moon did a Ta Da in front of
 > her, then nodded.
 >
 >     "Zhu Shu see how that could distract until transformation done, but
 > it take too long."

I don't think that really helps.  Most of the youma weren't lesbians.

****Hummm.  do you think I was subtle enough about the nosebleed?***

Posting this to FFML only, since the last couple I replied to you directly 
bounced.

LSMcGill

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