Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/Love Hina/Goldenboy] Diamonds in the Rough -- Chapter four
From: Brian Randall
Date: 9/29/2002, 6:32 PM
To: Larry F
CC: 'Jason Liao' <jliao@phoenix.Princeton.EDU>, 'Innocent Bystanders' <FFML@anifics.com>


Larry F wrote:
      "Oh, Ranma," Tsuruko piped up, waving her free hand 

at him. "I

believe you're interested in men, as well!"

I wasn't able to quite understand the nuances of this line, or the
following few.  Perhaps it's explained the LH manga (which I have
never read).  You seem to be implying that Tsuruko is male, which is
counter to her description through this fic.

	Nope.  The line would have been better as: "Oh Ranma," Tsuruko
piped up, waving her free hand at him. "I also believe you're interested
in men!"

	Now you should be able to see that she's fishing for a kiss to
prove her wrong, just like the one that Kitsune got.  ^__^

	Excelent. I'll use that. Thanks, Larry!

  Ja mata,
  Larry F

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