Subject: [FFML] Re: [Orig] Angelblade chapter 01
From: Deborah Goldsmith
Date: 9/29/2002, 4:56 PM
To: Jeffrey Yang
CC: ffml@anifics.com


On Friday, September 27, 2002, at 12:21 AM, Jeffrey Yang wrote:
"Nothing important," Reiya answered, lifting her bike up as Minaki 
came out
wearing a pink helmet, elbowpads, and kneepads over her normal 
schoolgirl
outfit. "We should go now, before it gets too late."

FYI, the first thing you do when you get home from school is to change 
clothes, so as not to cause the uniform any more wear and tear than is 
necessary. That's true for both girls and boys. From what I gather the 
kids are pretty keen to get out of the uniforms anyway, as they're not 
seen as being particularly cool.

She glanced down at Minaki, who was using one of the towels to brush as
much grime off of her uniform as possible.

...and that's why kids take them off when they get home from school. :-)

Also FYI, "ce" is not a sound in Japanese, so "Eice" can't really be a 
Japanese name. Of course, maybe that was intentional. "Ei" is a nice 
prefix for a name; one kanji with that pronunciation means "eternal" or 
"long." Japanese surnames that start with that kanji include "Eikichi" 
(long good fortune), "Eigen" ("long" and "origin"), "Eito" ("long" and 
"door"), and "Eikawa/Eigawa" ("long" and "river"). Feel free to make up 
your own names, though.

Debbie


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