|  Ranma fought Shan, his pride *No!*  He saw Shan�s barrier, tasted the
| cruelty in Shan�s smile.  *Not just for pride!*  He thought of Kasumi and
| Akane, recalling his desire to protect them.  {To Impress them and gain
| praise} *They would have died if I fled, I had to keep them safe, whatever
| their response.  I. . .*
|  *End Vision*
|  Ranma floated deeper into the room.
|  *Vision*
|  Ranma was
|  *End Vision*

   Ouch, nasty way to end this piece.

   Glad to see you're writing more of this, thanks for sending it. :)


Druid
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   Zidane, Final Fantasy IX




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