allyn wrote:

well, other than demanding that you write more of the same,

 Nope. This is a one shot shortfic. No chance of continuation. I think it
 works best as a short, at least in my hands.

all I can

say is that this is the funniest and best thing I've read in a long

while.

Absolutely wonder-full!

 Thanks. Glad you liked it.

OK, if I must find something to complain about, the Kasumi & mother

flashback was a bit dull.

Yeah. Someone else suggested I put more in the scene, but nothing came to
 be, and it wasn't the sort of thing that could be dragged out without
 deviating too far from the initial concept.

OK, I've C&C'd.
FUNNY, funny, funny!
Still LOL.
funny!

 And thanks for the C+C. It's appreciated.

 D.B. Sommer

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