Wow, the Kuno siblings sound *sane*!  You've turned the Ranmaverse
upside down! :)

It sounds like a good start of a story, but as always, it's the
characterizations that will make or break it, and we haven't yet seen
enough to really know what Dachi and Tachi are like in your world. 
Erm.. I mean "Coach" and "Tach."  Bleh, what wierd nicknames.

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