Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fusion][R1/2/Avengers] Avenging Chapter 10: Ten Rings to Rule Them All III
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 9/24/2002, 10:31 AM
To: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


Michael A Chase wrote:




Yep, decided to (Finally) try and wrap up this first story arc. I did
sort
of leave it on a cliffhangerish ending with the heroes getting defeated.
Will probably do the next chapter of this, then go back to The Things We
Wish For... just in case anyone was concerned about me not finishing
'Things.'

Wheew.

Chapte 11 is done and I only need one more prereader to get back to me.
Things We Wish for 6 is over halfway done as well. 40k in one day,
amazingly. It'll need heavy revising, but it flowed really well so far.
Hopefully the rest will be the same.

fish for the family? Why, given the number of people who died in car
accidents, she was still more likely to die crossing the street, even if
she
gave up {superheroeing : superheroing}.

I guess she was a bit nnervous.

Heh.


Speed Demon said, "Let's hurry up. I'm hungry. I'll put the pig in the
somnia gas chamber. You put the girl on the table."

Isn't it out of character for them to get that straight? :}b

Actually they already screwed up inadvertently by separating Thor from her
hammer.


"Everything seems to be working fine. The gas will keep the pig asleep
and
the neural table will prevent any higher brain activity, like waking up,
from Thor," Speed Demon said as he looked over the control panel. "Let's
go
eat."

That may be a mistake.  Does she use any higher brain functions as Thor?

THat's more along a line concerning the Hulk. :P


out of our predicament instead of YELLING AT EACH OTHER FOR NO DAMN
REASON?!"

It's good to know someone is the voice of sweet reason.  Seems a bit odd
for it to be Kodachi.

Yeah, someone else said the same thing.



"Nope. I was the only one with Cap. Maybe Thor had a sidekick."

"Playing dumb only serves to anger me," the Mandarin warned.

Doesn't like them playing to their strengh?

^_^


"Get out of here!" the Mandarin snapped. The duo exited immediately.
"Does
anyone else wish to leave?"

"Me," Iron Rose said.

Good straight line.  The answer should have been obvious.

Yep. Old joke. It seemed to work.


that it was really a defective Doombot she had beaten, and that it had
been
summarily destroyed for daring to debase the good Doctor's name. I mean,
wouldn't you if someone claimed Squirrel Girl kicked your ass? ^_^  And
yes,
the Mandarin's Centurions are indeed identical to Cylons from Battlestar
Galactic. Kudos if you're old enough to remember that series.

I'm not sure that's a good thing.  I wonder if they ever found that
shining
star known as Dirt or Mud or something like that.

In terms of power, Cylons fall way short of  fun loving spacefaring races,
like the Shiar, Skrulls, Kree, or even Badoon.


In case anyone was wondering, Mexico City's population is somewhere
around
13+ million by the latest census estimate. Just in case the full impact
of
Mandy's statement wasn't fully realized.

That does make it rather excessive if he really wants to rule people
instead of corpses.  I guess he couldn't have destroyed Washington, DC;
that would have made it too easy for the US to respond effectively.

Actually Mandy is of the opinion the world is overpopulated anyway and he'll
need to introduce negative population growth. One of the appealing things
about MC was eliminating a large population which would be a step in the
right direction. However the second target will be more 'high profile', to
show the world that no one is immune to his touch.
Besides, the writer needs DC intact since he needs it for some things in the
future, like financing the Hulkbusters. I didnt' forget about Banner and
Ross from chapter one. Reintroducing them hasn't been convienent is all.

D.B. Sommer




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