At 07:27 PM 9/22/2002 -0700, Michael A Chase wrote:

On Sat, 21 Sep 2002 23:32:09 -0500 "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net> wrote:

Sailor Moon and her friends belong to Naoko Takeuchi. They're used here
without my permission. Cobalt and the others are mine. Personally, I don't
mind if you use them but they've threatened to drain all the energy out of
anyone who tries to make them work extra.

That seems rather OOC.  They just want to be left alone.

I've been working them overtime. They're starting to get pretty touchy 
about it.

        "You should have heard her last night," Artemis noted. "She
kept me up all night."

Considering that she was up too, Luna's sympathy for him is probably
limited.

Woe unto the husband of the pregnant woman. There is no right he can do nor 
justice he can attain.


 >>         Minako nodded. "You can only sing 'Happy Happy World' so many

times before your brain starts to seriously warp."

It's interesting that Minako feels that way.  I can hardly imagine what
Haruka thinks, if she still can.

Hehehe...

 >>         "No more!" Venus begged. "I'll do anything. "Please, just

don't hurt me any more. Don't throw me in the briar patch! Argh! I'm
going, Dave! I can feel it. I can feel my mind going. Daisy...
Daisy..."

That was horrifying.  And acting _is_ her day job.  Thankfully Germanium
wasn't much of a critic.

Heheh... Overacting, maybe. See the scene in chapter one where she's 
forgotten her lines.

 >         The darkness began to swirl around her as her consciousness

faded. The last thing she saw before passing out were the retreating
shadows and, concealed within them, a pair of glinting eyes and a
glowing green scar.

Cobalt should be able to recognize Ytterbium from that.  The hard part will
be believing that Ytterbium has been opposed to what she's been doing.  I'm
having some trouble understanding that myself, I guess we'll find out in
the stirring conclusion.  Soon, I hope.

We'll be dealing with the fallout from the meeting in the next (and last) 
chapter

Thanks for all the helpful corrections, Michael!

C.
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step in ethical and moral growth. Since 'Zero Tolerance' is all about
eliminating responsibility, I think there's a damn good indicator
that zero tolerance policies stunt ethical and moral behavior."

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