well, other than demanding that you write more of the same, all I can
say is that this is the funniest and best thing I've read in a long while.
Absolutely wonder-full!

OK, if I must find something to complain about, the Kasumi & mother flashback was a bit dull. 

OK, I've C&C'd.
FUNNY, funny, funny!
Still LOL.
funny!



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