Ooookayyy  . . .
I can't possibly C&C this thing, because it's so far removed from
anything I'd write.
you've written a story within a story, Ranma & Shakespeare (and an SI?)
and made it work. I don't know how, but you did. It works. It's funny.
The characters seem REAL!

Frankly the idea of  a Ranma/Shakespeare story seemed, to me, about
as workable as glazed liver pudding with pineapple-trout sprinkles.

I was VERY wrong (about the Ranma/Shakespear. I've still got my doubts
about the pudding.)

Funny. Smooth, natural dialogue . . .What am i saying?!
It's true, but how the <bleep> do you put Ranma & Shakespeare together
in a workable story? 

Obviously the author is a member of a very advanced alien civilization. 
it's the only thing that makes sense. No human brain could comprehend
such a thing, let alone make it work.

Funny, well written.
Bravissimo!

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