Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][ranma]Lure the Tiger from the Mountains 8-10/30
From: Elin Bjurvald
Date: 9/17/2002, 10:42 AM
To: Donald Lee Granberry <noharness@mac.com>, Allyn Yonge <allynyonge0000@netscape.net>, ffml@anifics.com



    "And when I find him," Ukyou ground out, ignoring
Souun, and Nabiki,  "I'm gonna skin him and salt the
hide----"

    "That's not a friendly thing to say," Akane remarked
mildly, giving no indication that she disagreed ( in principle)
with the thought.
 
[POV finally set with Akane. 

Wait a minute. Why is that? Doesn't "giving no indication" say that we
might be seeing her from the outside only? Or do the words "in
principle" contradict that?
I'm asking because I don't think we have seen anything from Akane's
point of view in this story so far. I may be wrong, but I can't recall
any passage that gets inside her head. 
So if you're right, either it's a new element in the story, or it's
something that Allyn should re-word, I think. 

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