On Fri, 13 Sep 2002, L.S McGill wrote:

Rain is supposed to be a cleansing, a refreshing of the Earth as it washed
down the dust and fed thirsty crops.  All of her life, Shan Pu had liked
rain.

Not if she's been cursed for awhile, she hasn't. :p

had encountered as a girl alone in Tokyo.  While she had been safe enough
from the one mugger she had met, she spoke poor Japanese, and what little
money she had had soon been gone.

Still awkward. ^_^;;;

...and what little money she had been quickly spent on dried food, water
containers, protective clothing, shotgun ammunition, and other 'capital
expendatures'.  What the Amazonian accountants didn't know wouldn't hurt
them.

I like this one better than my Ferrari suggestion. ^_^

She growled in aggravation, once more cursing the arrogant prince who'd....

Beaten her in a tennis game.  She knew she shouldn't have started with
that PoT.

of her dress before righting herself.  Shan Pu blinked at her a gain as she

a gain = again.

probation."  She held out a bottle of sake.  "Want schome?"

[Later]

/o~MEOW, MEow meow meow MEOW!!!~o/

Shampoo sighed.  Silly lady.  Shouldn't have taken that offer to share a
drink.  She decided to buy Urd another beer, in hopes that the awful
racket would stop if Urd's mouth was busy guzzling more alcohol.

in front of the drunk womans face.  She tried to turn to bite her,or get her

Need space after comma

"Schimmer down, Schampoo."  The woman said, the shock of hearing her name
used causing Shan Pu to stare at the self proclaimed goddess.

[Later] "What's your name?"
"Call me Schampoo...I mean, Xian Piu.  No, I meant Tien Fu.  Scram
Ste...oh heck.  Just call me Shirley."

"I am not de... de... delusional!"  Urd protested drunkenly.  "I'm a goddess
of  love!"

Same caps problems.  Proper nouns, and all.

"Well, whadda ya know.  Your wish has been approved."  Urd said before her
eyes rolled back in her head and she fell forward...

And thus, Shampoo was finally let go. ^_^

no idea what she should do.  If the woman really was a goddess, it might not
be a good idea to just leave, and it probably wouldn't do to give her the
scratching she deserved for manhandling her like that, but...

Kinky. ^_^

Shan Pu raised an eyebrow.  How could this girl know her name too?

Belldandy nodded.  "I'm sure this must be confusing for you.  I am so sorry.
  Usually, we meet clients far more formally.  I'm sorry my sister was
drunk. She's had a very hard time recently."

Shampoo made the wish.  Mindreading session should be over by now.

Will respond to the response to the response to the comment later.
I'm far too tired atm.

-Natsume Ranma Ranma
-------
The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner,
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of
my Anime supplier.

One look at his face and I knew that I had been betrayed.  "Tell me,"
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao," he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...


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