Subject: [FFML] Re: [AMG]Trials of the Heart, Prologue/Teaser
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 9/6/2002, 11:23 AM
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TK wrote:

"Belldandy? I'm going down to the market to pick up a snack and some ice
cream, in case Skuld drops by. Anything I can get for you while I'm
there?"

Bell: Birth Control Pills.

Keiichi: Wh... wh... why?

Urd: Has a new boyfriend and wanted me to grab them for her, but since
you're going, I'd like to pick them up for me.

Keiichi: Thank goodness.


"Some celery would be good�?� and some eggs, too. I can't think of
anything
else at the moment." She finally responded, looking at him. He was
grinning
slightly, and she blushed slightly,

two 'slightly's close together. I'd change or drop one of them.

knowing she was the cause of it.

    Keiichi nodded, and turned towards the door, lopsided grin still in
place.
"Keiichi!" Belldandy called from behind him. He froze, then turned.
"Yes?"
"You forgot your keys," She said, holding them up.
"Oh. No, I thought I'd walk to the little market up the road. It's a nice
day
out, so�?� I think I'll just walk today." He said, nodding, as if
convincing
himself.

So he's up to something.



    Before it had settled in the cradle, she was moving towards the
nearest
mirror. Kami-sama never said "immediately" unless it was important.

And if he said, 'Get your ass here now' it was something really, really
important.

She
didn't know what to expect, but knew that she was needed in her Fathers

Father's

--==--

--==--

    Walking back, Keiichi'd realized that he had a lot to be thankful for.

Which we know is about to change, thanks to the earlier scene and Bell's
urgency. :)


    He turned, looking uphill, at the temple he now shared with Belldandy
(and, of course, her sisters, whenever they dropped by.) So caught up in
his
thoughts, he failed to hear, or notice at all, the truck coming from the
other direction. And, just as unfortunate, the truck driver failed to
notice
him soon enough.

Flattened Keiichi. Probably Bell's 'Trial' as much as anything again. Wonder
if she'll try to bring him back somehow.

Interesting enough. I'll have to read the next part soon.

D.B. Sommer



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