"My markings are not strange, Saotome-san.

I'm not an OMG expert, but I'm pretty sure Skuld's not a mind-reader.

	She isn't.  BUT... It was established in the very first episode
of OMG that the goddesses are granted the ability to read the mind of
their client for that one occasion, so that they can fulfill the
client's true wish, not just the words spoken.  It's heaven, so they
fulfill the spirit of the wish, not just the letter.

To be continued...

Overall, grammar pretty good; some problems as noted above, 
but you got
a good deal of the trickier stuff right.

	Thanks, Gary!  I'm his grammar coach, so that's a compliment to
me, too.  ^__^

  Ja mata,
  Larry F

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