As always, thank you for the comments!

her.  She would not be ... pleasant without it.

Ranma is not very ... pleasant with it.  When Akane discovers that it is
part of her essence that helps contain Ranma, it may make Akane's
acceptance of her own nature easier.

I don't know, she's not insulting Akane all the time, that's relatively 
pleasant.  :D

"You," Happosai continued, seeing the Tendo girl's utterly blank stare,
"are Grand Dragon Ryujin the Blue, Lady of Light, Life and Water, the 

sworn

enemy of Ryukyu the Red."

Good point to end the scene.

I'm glad you liked it, although I'm debating whether or not I should show 
Akane's reaction or not.

I've had a comment or two saying that the proceedings of this chapter aren't 
very clear, i.e., it's not clear if Akane wakes up and goes out to the 
garden or if she's just dreaming.  I'm going to repost the chapter today or 
tomorrow with a scene added, one that I originally snipped to put into 
chapter 8.  It should make the progression of events through this chapter a 
little clearer.

Regards,
R. E.

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