In a message dated 8/15/02 8:59:25 PM, defender@sluggy.net writes:

*Whew* I think all the C&C has been covered, changes made, and it's all

good 

to go. 

Well . . . .

Uh-oh...

Amy Lynn also noted that the "machete" was actually a very large knife.

Now all she needs is a flashlight and a coffee cup.  ^_^

?

"Mom likes to buy furniture that can be assembled and disassembled at

will," Amy Lynn replied. "I think it's a habit she picked up in the Army."

And very sensible of her, too.  *Recalls a mover opening a drawer and saying
'Here's the legs to your couch.'*

Heh

Immeditly, she began to feel around for the seatbelt.

'Immeditly' is wrong.  I believe the correct spelling is 'immediately',
but won't swear to that.

Spell checker agrees with you

Bunny's driving skill seemed to be best described as "Pick a direction

and try not to hit anything. Oh, and use of the brake is forbidden." 

The sad thing is, I've seen drivers like that.  In fact, someone once told
me that his father instructed him not to ever use the brake on hills or
curves.

My driving instructor was the same way. 

Extraneous line break in the middle of a word.

Hm. No line break at my end. Might be the mail program.

I believe that should be spelled business.

My spell checker says it's the other way. Quite frankly, I've quit worrying 
about it.

*blinks*  Good grief.  I spent four years in southeast Georgia; that's
rediculous even for there.  Granted, the school system did a number of
rediculous things, but nothing quite that bad.

Half the fun of this fic is the cliches

I realize that I've made a lot of nit-picky grammar corrections, but realize
that I wouldn't be replying at all if I didn't enjoy the story on some
level.  Looking forward to see where you take things.

No worries. My skin is a lot thicker then most. Quite frankly, if you didn't 
like it, you would have either flamed me or not said anything.

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