In a message dated 8/15/02 8:48:27 PM, eabecerr@schollnet.com writes:

Another man dressed in a blue shirt and khakis walked up to them. He had
short, blond hair, a pointed chin and the coldest eyes Amy Lynn had ever
seen. It was as though there was nothing behind those blue orbs. "This

is

Jeddadiah Wright," Michael said. "He's currently in charge of the
Plantation's permanent work force. Jed, this my daughter, Amy Lynn."

"A pleasure," Jeddadiah said perfucntorily. His handshake was very stiff.
"Her teacher, while pleased that she has been reunited with her father,

would

like it if she began her project."

        ALMOST perfect here, but you missed a wonderful joke/pun/ironic
wisecrack. It _should_ be Jed White, not Wright. White as in the deliberate
mis-spelling of wight, an undead demonic creature. Given he's a youma,
that's a gloriously bad pun on his own nature.

True, except that's Michael's last name.

Sorry to hear about your lover. But hey, if you're gonna go after someone, go 
after whoever wrote that stupid policy.


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