At 20:42 8/15/2002, Kyhdin@aol.com wrote:

Another man dressed in a blue shirt and khakis walked up to them. He had
short, blond hair, a pointed chin and the coldest eyes Amy Lynn had ever
seen. It was as though there was nothing behind those blue orbs. "This is
Jeddadiah Wright," Michael said. "He's currently in charge of the
Plantation's permanent work force. Jed, this my daughter, Amy Lynn."

"A pleasure," Jeddadiah said perfucntorily. His handshake was very stiff.
"Her teacher, while pleased that she has been reunited with her father, would
like it if she began her project."

         ALMOST perfect here, but you missed a wonderful joke/pun/ironic
wisecrack. It _should_ be Jed White, not Wright. White as in the deliberate
mis-spelling of wight, an undead demonic creature. Given he's a youma,
that's a gloriously bad pun on his own nature.

         Ed Becerra.


         PS.

         And, as Gary rightfully rebuked me for, here's the situation update
WITH some C&C, thereby making it appropriate for the list.

         My Aili's out of surgery, she has a drain in her leg, a catheter..
well, where catheters GO (uhg), and she's on a liquid diet along with
blood thinners. Doctors expect her to recover fully, but haven't seen fit
to let me know how her lung is recovering from the embolism. I'm "not family."

         Personal note: kill doctors. AFTER they finish fixing her.


         "Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal..."



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