I think I may have jumped the gun, here.

    Before it had settled in the cradle, she was moving towards

the nearest 

mirror. Kami-sama never said "immediately" unless it was

important. She 

didn't know what to expect, but knew that she was needed in her
Fathers 
office yesterday. And, practically diving through the mirror,
Belldandy left 
the temple she and Keiichi had come to call their home.

A potential problem here. If Keiichi is wearing the sweater that
Belldandy made, it's after Terrible Master Urd which was the
turning
point regarding Belldandy's attitude of Heaven (including
Kami-sama)
vs. Keiichi. Belldandy at this point would never leave Keiichi so
easily, no matter what Kami-sama said. Could you make this a phone
call instead of a visit? 

Unless, of course, you mean the sweater from OAV5, in which case this
scene is fine. The OAV Belldandy isn't as independently-minded as the
manga one.

I tend to get manga-on-the-brain. ^_^;

Brian Welch

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