Hallo all,

I'm nearing the end of Chapter 7 and I would like some opinions before I
release it to the FFML at large.  There are one or two things I would like
criticism on, so if anyone on the list has read the previous chapters and is
interested in offering comment on the portion that exists of the next,
please contact me privately.

With chapter 7 the introduction has finished, and we move into the story
proper.  Things are about to change drastically for Akane, and it's
something I want to get right.  Here's a synopsis of the chapter so people
can tell what they're getting themselves into:

Chapter Seven
"Into The Wonderful"

"Ranma, the hunters and Hidari at her heels, takes Akane to an old student
of hers, one who shares a special understanding of both herself and Akane.
The time has come for Akane to awaken to what she truly is, what she is
capable of, and why Ranma will never leave her side.  She has taken many
steps from home, now, it is time to take her first step forward, into the
wonderful.  The master and the student shall learn together - but which is
the master and which is the student?"

Thanks in advance to those who choose to reply.

Regards,
R. E.

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http://ten.waxwolf.com
Perfection has a price.

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