At 01:59 PM 7/30/2002 -0400, * Diese * wrote:

Hello Chris,

Nice to see you writing again, I always enjoy your works.

My only tiny nitpick with this particular one stems from your author notes 
at the end.  I am no anatomy scholar, but for a woman of 5'10'' to be 
muscular, she would need to weigh more than the said 130lbs.  That weight 
is more closely related to models who have little if any body fat and 
very, very little muscle mass.  If you had stopped the description before 
mentionning a weight, I would not have had any problems with it whatsoever.

While Cobalt is not supposed to be (completely) human, Mrs. Jones agrees 
with you. Cobalt's weight will probably go up.

Cobalt: You're making me gain weight?!?! METASPIKE!!

Sailor Moon: I agree. I won't tolerate villianous writers who force pretty 
girls to put on a bunch of weight against their will. I'm Sailor Moon, and 
in the name of the moon, I'll punish you! MOON PRINCESS VENGEANCE STRIKE!!

Jones: *gurgle*...








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