At 07:39 PM 7/29/2002 -0700, you wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Mon, 29 Jul 2002 16:25:47 -0500 "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net> wrote:

        "Do you?" Makoto asked. "You know how well the both of you
react whenever anyone from outside shows up. We fought with the
Canine Sailors for a week before we were able to make up."
Makoto paused, suddenly trying her best to keep a straight face. She
couldn't help but snicker into her hands. "Of course it helped that
Usagi brought a jumbo-size bag of dog-biscuits along to that last
fight."

I'm not sure I want to know how that happened.

Just imagine five labradors in vinyl seifuku and you'll come pretty close 
to the horror that I imagined.

        Standing, she kicked the bed frame, hoping to work out her
anger at {her self : herself} and at Haruka. All she managed to do was 

break her

toenail and bleed all over her sheets.

        A Youma General was painting a sign on a storefront.

Now that's something you don't see every day.

But, if you think about it, Jadeite had to have done it once or twice. His 
youma couldn't be trusted not to draw attention to themselves. Neither can 
Cobalt, for that matter, but-- Anyway, there were a few episodes of the 
first season where *somebody* had to set up a store front for the Dark 
Kingdom. This is a silly take on how that happened, but a good one, I think.

        "Let's call them and tell them what we're planning," Usagi
said decisively. "I belive that Haruka and Michiru will do what is
right."

Eep!

Of course Usagi believes in them. If she didn't, they wouldn't feel nearly 
so guilty....

I see at least two major plots here.  Survival for the remaining youma and
the rebuilding of Haruka and Michiru.  It will be very interesting to see
how each goes.

Haruka and Michiru will get some good lines in later chapters. We'll also 
check in on Hotaru and Setsuuna later too.

C.



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