Subject: [FFML] Re: [FanFic][Ranma/SM] Going at it Like Rabbits!!! P.3 (3/?)
From: Boredcollective@aol.com
Date: 7/6/2002, 11:26 PM
To: rgorman@telusplanet.net
CC: ffml@anifics.com


In a message dated 7/6/2002 2:23:22 AM US Mountain Standard Time, 
rgorman@telusplanet.net writes:

Hmm... It was public commentary, so a public response seems appropriate.
Okay, adding it into the CC line...

   Tomoyo leaned over to the brunette and whispered, "Could that
 >be a Clow Card, Sakura?"
 
 >    Sakura nodded slowly, pursing her lips in thought. "Hmmm...
 >Maybe, but I'll have to ask Kero-chan."
 
 "Hmm...  I don't sense one.  I'll ask Kero-chan."

Yeah, that's a better way of putting it. Thanks for suggesting it.
It's lots of little details like this that can make all the difference.

Concerning Luna-P turning into a pencil in front of everyone, I've
changed it and now it looks like this:

    "Neat trick," Terada-sensei commented.

    Tomoyo leaned over to the brunette and whispered, "Could that
be a Clow Card, Sakura?"

    Sakura nodded slowly, pursing her lips in thought. "Hmm... I
don't sense one. I'll ask Kero-chan when I get home."

    Genma blinked at Luna-P's quick response to her necessity, then
shrugged and twisted over to face the front.



And if I recall correctly, Kero didn't usually follow her around
everywhere. There was usually enough time for the
Cardcaptor crew to regroup and plan to get each Clow Card,
right?

So, looking back over the scene, we've got Genma Saotome,
cursed to look like Chibiusa, forced to go to school with the
Cardcaptor Sakura cast.

What? Noooo, I LIKE Genma. He's funny. ^_^;;;; Really.

I was thinking about making Genma become a Nurse Angel,
but I couldn't find enough info about "Nurse Angel Ririka" to
make a difference. So, on the fly, I had to find another series
that had the 3-5 grader magical girl series cast for a properly
embarrassing interaction.

If any Cardcaptors/Cardcaptor Sakura fans have any preferences
on how to mesh Genma into that particular side story, I'm open
to suggestions.

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Still waiting for Louis-Philippe Giroux to make good on his threat
to write a Cardcaptor Sakura/Harry Potter crossover. The idea
sounds like it could be fun. ^_^

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