Subject: [FFML] [C&C]SM: End of Days (Sequel to SM: Gray) [Fanfic][SM][Spoiler] - Chapter 8
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 7/1/2002, 11:25 PM
To: Django Wexler , ffml@anifics.com


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Mon, 1 Jul 2002 20:14:47 -0400 Django Wexler <dwexler@andrew.cmu.edu>
wrote:

     I wasn't going to swear my life to revenge, tempting though that
seemed.  And I wasn't going to spend the rest of my days here in this
slum.  What I was going to do was find out what had happened to everyone
-- to Setsuna, to Haruka and Michiru, to Rei and Usagi and the rest --
and having either located them or confirmed that they were dead, we
would all leave Earth together.  Jahara would probably object, but I
suspected not too strongly.  After all, *Aegis* was large enough for
tens of thousands of people.  Why should six or seven more matter?

Except that, if they are still alive, they are still this planet's
guardians.  She's still a bit shell-shocked.

     "She'll give them a good kicking if they try."  The other woman,
silent until now, favored us with a sudden grin, then spat on the
ground.  "Fuckin' snakes.  The Imps should slaughter the lot of them."

Are 'snakes' reptiles or another gang.  If the later, it should be
capitalized.

     "H..."  I swallowed.  "Haruka?"

The earlier ramblings sounded more like a disipated Setsuna, which made the
final revelation more of a surprise.

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