You know, I suppose it wouldn't work as well as a lemon, but it seems to
me that Artemis and Luna probably wouldn't get together in human form
the first time.  It isn't their natural form, after all.

"Zoo" is not a proper name when used in isolation.  It is, "The Tokyo
Zoo", or "the zoo".

I have trouble believing that Akane wouldn't clobber any man who she
suddenly founded naked on top of her.  Very possibly shrieking at the
top of her lungs.  I also admire Minako's confidence that she can make
love so quietly that her mother won't hear.   Personally she strikes me
as a screamer.

Indeed, I think you are making it too easy for the foursome.  In
fiction, particularly romantic fiction, easy is bad, and hard is good.



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