Good thinking, Mark! I'll give it some thought.
 
Don.

Michael Noakes wrote:

Just a few comments about the earlier stuff as well:

I'm not sure if I buy the whole yakuza angle.  I'll admit, I don't know much
about the Yaks, nor their shady history... but this seems a bit out of
character.  The aftermath of a huge hurricane isn't exactly like the end of
a world war; whereas then they had ample oportunity to entrench themselves
into the Japanese infrastructure, here they've got to realize that in a
couple days, weeks, everything'll be back up and running per usual.  Open
aggressions to take over a single clinic and milk the locals for a few days
seems rather foolish.  I dunno.

I kind of agree with Mike here.  Maybe the simplest fix is that
the Yakuza boss that had the agreement with Tendo died in the storm
and his younger (foolish) lieutenant thinks all deals are therefore
void and renegotiable.  Some dialogue to that effect at the beginning
of the fight would explain things.
--
Mark Biggar
mark.a.biggar@attbi.com

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