On Sat, Jun 22, 2002 at 06:10:54PM -0400, Sam Vilsmeier wrote:
As for the story itself, it's yet another 'Ranma gets fed up and buggers
off' story. Bleah.
Oyh. I give you a prologue, and you think I summerized the entire fict...
He did go "Ahw fuck it!" go to "bugger off" and move in with setsuna, he
just found something worthwhile that is not part of his standard life.
The problem with most fics like this is not the ultimate goal, but the
transition from the canonical Ranmaverse to the fic. It's just way too
abrupt, considering that canonical Ranma seems to prefer the status quo.
Why is Ranma now thinking this way?
I don't know where you plan to take this, but having a hackneyed opening
that repeats the same mistakes as almost every other fic of its ilk does not
seem very auspicious to me.