I'm not going to give you a blow by blow review, but on a readability

note,

remember that a rip to PT deletes the line breaks between paragraphs

unless

you add them manually.  It would help the readibility a lot.

On a DP note, the only thing needed might be an explanation of how the

Joker

clone has all of his memories.  Yuri clone had both DNA and a up to date
neural net backup.   With out the NN, the clones just a blank slate.

Beyond that, kick ass story.  Looking forward to the rest.  Love the
dialogue, and love the take on the Joker.

mRNA (Memory RNA)

Its an OLD sci fi cliche that allows clones to wake up with all the memories
and skills that the original had when the tissue sample was taken.



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