Not much to point out.
--On 6/19/02 8:31 PM -0700 Raye Johnsen wrote:
Chapter Four: You Can't Change The Colour Of Your
Destiny
Commonwealth spelling of Colo(u)r.
Here, in the serenity of the temple, she thought that
becoming a permanent shrine maiden, as Rei-san
Since you were using kunoichi before, you might as well use miko for shrine
maiden, too. :-)
As Nadeshiko turned to the next painting, she
couldn't help feeling there was some significance here
- something she was missing. She turned to the next
image, this one of a woman sitting in a cave with
She's turning to the next painting/image twice.
Interesting story, I'm curious to see where it goes next.
Jim