Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Wed, 19 Jun 2002 20:31:23 -0700 (PDT) Raye Johnsen <raye_j@yahoo.com>
wrote:
Secondly, *PLEASE* comment and {critize : criticize}!
Thank you for continuing to send this to FFML in addition to your Topica
list. I really don't want to put my email address anywhere near Topica's
system considering their current friendly atitude to spammers.
The retaliatory strike with waterbombs had, however,
been most satisfying, and she had gotten photographic
evidence. Haruka didn't look good at all as a drowned
rat, and her fans in the racing world would have been
delighted to find that out.
I don't see how her fans would be pleased, her rivals perhaps. On the
other hand, her diehard fans would probably take any pictures they could
get.
Things were moving faster than she {anticipated : had anticipated : had expected}.
Interesting that Beryl is one of the images.
This is an interesting variation and I look forward eagerly to the next
installment.
To refresh my memory of the previous chapters, I went to your website and
reread them. I noticed one typo you may want to correct:
adp1.html:
{Kanada : Kaneda} looked startled at Usagi's open friendliness. "I'm
Ten- Terou A- Kaneda. It's good to meet you."